"It's Not Clean Enough!"

Here is a scene I deleted from chapter 14 of my fanfiction story: Adventures in Camping. It's when Alice and Rosalie go to take Bella to the movies.

RPOV

We found Bella cleaning the bathtub.

With a toothbrush.

“Bella! What are you doing!?” Alice wondered. She didn't answer. I sighed.

“Let's go Bella. We're going to see a movie. “

“NO! No I have to keep scrubbing. It's not clean enough.” Alice and I exchanged a look. The bathtub looked pretty shiny to me. And if you looked in it from just the right angle you could see your reflection.

“You can clean it later,” Alice tried again.

“NO!” Just then someone banged loudly on the bathroom door.

“Bella!” Charlie's voice boomed. “I have to use the bathroom!”

“No! The tub is still dirty. Just go use the forest again.” My eyes widened. Was Bella serious? Charlie was really using the forest as his personal potty? Eww.

Alice glanced nervously at her watch and then walked out the door, leaving me with OCD Bella. She continued to ignore me, only scrubbing harder and harder.

When Alice came back in Charlie was with her. The pushed past me and positioned themselves on either side of Bella's body. Without warning, they grabbed her and she struggled, creaming loudly.

“STOP! STOP! I NEED TO CLEAN THE TUB! IT'S STILL DIRTY!” I winced from the sound of Bella's voice. It was high pitched and screechy.

I followed after Charlie, Alice and Bella. They threw her into the backseat of Alice's Porsche strapping her in. The toothbrush was still in her hand. I guess no one had the patience to try to wrestle it out of her hands.

Another deleted scene. Jasper and Emmett are taking Edward to the car to go to the movies.

JPOV

After Alice went to pick up Rosalie and Bella, I guided Edward, who was staring blankly at the TV screen to Emmett's Jeep. He had to block his eyes when we got outside even though the sun wasn't even coming through the clouds.

“What's wrong Edward?” I asked, concerned. The last thing we needed right now was for Edward to not be feeling well. Alice had told me the plan before she left and it was pure genius.

“The sun,” he said. The sun?

“What about it?”

“It's too bright.”

“But you can't even see it!”

“Too bright,” he whined once more. I guess staying locked up in your dark room for so long would do that to you.

Emmett came rushing out the door. “Okay guys! We're going to see 'Crosshairs'!”

“Crosshairs?” I asked.